Hello Readers,
Today I wanted to share a freeform poem I wrote based off of a person I met at church. I always enjoy hearing people’s stories, and this person had an interesting tattoo to go with their story. It was one of those things that are just begging to be written.
the scars i chose for myself
my scars were inked into my flesh
i chose them, i suppose.
black and white, writhing in my skin
i fought the battle but i lost the war
and in my moment of defeat
a scar was chosen
my arm was covered
so
i
would
not
forget
how i fought and fought and
lost.
“i tried to drown my demons
but they learned
how
to
swim.”
now i’m going underwater
a father eases me in
i think i hear the people
they’re singing
for
who?
for me?
my soul yearns to sing with them
but i am not ready yet.
soon.
the holy water gets in my lungs
i choke on it but it burns
i feel my demons in my chest
they’re choking too
but now i’m breathing
then i’m up
the water is gone
and
so
are
they.
i look over
and there He is
holding every last one under
they burn in the water of baptism
i could not drown them
but thank God
that
He
could.
~Ruby
What an insightful poem, Ruby. What a gift you have been given!
Love you and miss you all.
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Thank you ❤ Love and miss you too!
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This is so well written, Ruby! I love it!
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Thank you! ❤
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Love this, Ruby! <33
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Thank you! ❤
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This gave me chills. Love the imagery!
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Beautiful.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Oh my word, this is amazing. Absolutely amazing. I love your poetry. It is so beautiful and full of life. This was beautifully written! 😀
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Oh goodness, thank you! ❤
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Of course!!! ❤
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This is so beautiful. Well done, Ruby!
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Aw, thanks. ❤
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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Hello! Wonderful poem. I was wondering is there some way to talk to you, not in the comments section? I’d go to the contact page but you don’t have one.
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Thank you 🙂 Um, I’m afraid there currently isn’t but I will have to set up a contact page. 🙂 What did you want to ask me about?
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Well, I wanted to start one of those award tag things, and i was going to tag you to start it off. It’s the lots of likes award. You give the award to the top 2 people who like your stuff. You like almost everything I post (thank you ever so much btw) and you are that person for me. I made a graphic and everything. *facepalms* it sounds so stupid typed out.
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Oh that’s super cool 🙂 Not stupid at all!
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Thank you. I can officially tag you now if you want…. XD
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Sure thing 🙂 I might not be able to get around to doing it but I really appreciate it!
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okay then. 🙂 Just in case you do ever get around to it: You have been nominated for exellence in liking. Basically you have likd practically everything I’ve written ever since you followed me. Thank you. Rules:
1. Repost this little message, or tweak it how you wish.
2. Repost the image linked/attached
https://spark.adobe.com/post/PrGCXSTuypP6T/
3.Tag the people who most often like your stuff.
Haha! Here you go!
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Very moving. Your inspiration really intrigued me and you’ve used enjambment really well! And I love that you mentioned God and how He can take away lives and be our savior too.
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Thank you! 🙂 I’m really glad you liked the symbolism and structure.
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